Page 4. I almost left this page out of the story, as I wasn't terribly happy with it to begin with. I had originally had a few captions explaining what was going on, narrator-style, and it was kinda clunky. When I went back through and inked it I went ahead and left these captions out, instead filling in the background and giving the panels a lot more depth. From here on there is no more narration/exposition, and the story starts to take on a life of its own. The narration was just experimental to begin with, and I don't think it really fits in with the style. 
Saturday, January 29, 2011
CREW: page 4
Page 4. I almost left this page out of the story, as I wasn't terribly happy with it to begin with. I had originally had a few captions explaining what was going on, narrator-style, and it was kinda clunky. When I went back through and inked it I went ahead and left these captions out, instead filling in the background and giving the panels a lot more depth. From here on there is no more narration/exposition, and the story starts to take on a life of its own. The narration was just experimental to begin with, and I don't think it really fits in with the style. 
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